This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
In writing the punui-o-toka known as the seniors done a that was summer poem with things that I smelt,tasted,saw,felt and hearing and seen and done in summer.
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Good job Josh that is a nice sentence
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